And here is the original page… I was more than happy to redo this! The drawing of her in the top panel is still good in my eyes… but the muddy color and brush stroles left me less than satisfied. I wanted to add more tension, more drama and give her a modus operandi that would foreshadow the coming of Little One.
I’m happy with the results; hopefully I won’t grow to hate it and redraw it in a year! Ha!